Comments

Log in with itch.io to leave a comment.

(+1)

the atmosphere is on point. the way kiva talks combined with the visually dreamy nature and the haunting piano expresses this creepy vibe that's also elegant in a way.

i do relate to her feelings on death. i can't quite put it into words, but something about the way it bothers her is relatable. her and her friends are filled with so much personality and also love for each other

the dreams are some of the best parts to me because of all the different ways i could interpret it. maybe the imagery isn't as clear cut to some people but i look at those scenes and my mind tries to pick it apart and figure out what it "means" etc etc. maybe poolpark did actually communicate in her mind. perhaps a side effect of the virus (or maybe not lol idk)

i'm starting to see the vision. i wonder what else we'll see in the series


(1 edit) (+1)

so good. i cannot particularly relate to Kiva's situation here but the stuff i can is extremely. yeah. i love how you write characters it all feels so real. i do really like kiva's writing here and her leaning on the rabbit metaphor to try and cope...wah. i love the friends so much. the writing style was a little jarring for me at first but once i got used to it i liked it a lot. 

the Hemotropic Friendship Virus has infectedd me.. we are rabbits and we are friends....

OMG thank youuu this is so sweet. hehe

(+1)

WE ARE RABBITS AND WE ARE FRIENDS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(+1)

YAAAAAY (grabs your hand and frolics with you in the flowers)